When an editor first explained to me the difference between direct and indirect writing, I just thought it was a stylistic choice.
Alice MattisonIf you have a character stand up and put on her shoes and open the door, in order to do that, you're imagining her shoes and her clothes and her house and her door. The character becomes more real. But once you've done that, you can probably just get it all across with a couple of details.
Alice Mattison