No - the light in Tamani's eyes was much more than a reflection. It was the fire that melted her anger and devastated her resolve, every single time she saw it.

No - the light in Tamani's eyes was much more than a reflection. It was the fire that melted her anger and devastated her resolve, every single time she saw it.

Guess I've been reading too much fantasy.

The first two chapters of any first draft generally need to be cut.

If the time comes and your dream doesn't seem worth it, then maybe it was the wrong dream.

All I'm saying is that you shouldn't stay with him for the wrong reasons, even if they are noble ones. No one owes it to someone else to be their girlfriend. It's a choice you remake every day.

May as well leave the door open.