Never use abstract nouns when concrete ones will do. If you mean โMore people diedโ donโt say โMortality rose.
C. S. LewisThe Christian has a great advantage over other men, not by being less fallen than they, nor less doomed to live in a fallen world, but by knowing that he is a fallen man in a fallen world.
C. S. LewisAh, poor Pole. It's been to much for her, this last bit. Turned her head, I shouldn't wonder. She's beginning to see things.
C. S. Lewis