It's not always to the benefit of the story to have it so preordained.
I felt like a number of things in me as a writer just clicked.
This is how sudden things happened that haunted forever.
I said shut up once already, with my mouth.
Pine trees with low limbs spread over fresh snow made a stronger vault for the spirit than pews and pulpits ever could.
Long, dark, and lovely she had been, in those days before her mind broke and the parts scattered and she let them go.