I believe every space and comma is a living part of the poem and has its function, just as every muscle and pore of the body has its function. And the way the lines are broken is a functioning part essential to the life of the poem.
Denise LevertovIf woman is inconstant, good, I am faithful to ebb and flow, I fall in season and now is a time of ripening.
Denise LevertovMediocrity is perhaps due not so much to lack of imagination as to lack of faith in the imagination, lack of the capacity for this abandon.
Denise Levertov