Look at me!โ I screeched. โLook at me, Amadeus von Linden, you sadistic hypocrite, and watch this time! Youโre not questioning me now, this isnโt your work, Iโm not an enemy agent spewing wireless code! Iโm just a minging Scots slag screaming insults at your daughter! So enjoy yourself and watch! Think of Isolde! Think of Isolde and watch!
Elizabeth WeinI tend not to attempt to describe pain. I don't feel I can comprehend or re-create the personal suffering of others, so I simply try to tell what happened, or what I imagine happened. I also think it helps to let the reader fill in a lot of the blanks. Melodrama is patronizing. With a straightforward statement, readers can figure out for themselves what's going on.
Elizabeth Wein