Never confuse movement with action.
Please tell me what can I do. There must be something I can do
The old man looked at him with his sun-burned, confident loving eyes.
I would write one true sentence, and then go on from there.
I had seen nothing sacred, and the things that were glorious had no glory and the sacrifices were like the stockyards at Chicago if nothing was done with the meat except to bury it.
Remember to get the weather in your damn book-weather is very important.