I've thought of the last line of some poems for years and tried them out, It wouldn't work because the last line was much too beautiful for the poem.
Howard NemerovReligion and science both profess peace (and the sincerity of the professors is not being doubted), but each always turns out to have a dominant part in any war that is going or contemplated.
Howard NemerovIt may be said that poems are in one way like icebergs: only about a third of their bulk appears above the surface of the page.
Howard Nemerov