One great aim of revision is to cut out. In the exuberance of composition it is natural to throw in - as one does in speaking - a number of small words that add nothing to meaning but keep up the flow and rhythm of thought. In writing, not only does this surplusage not add to meaning, it subtracts from it. Read and revise, reread and revise, keeping reading and revising until your text seems adequate to your thought.
Jacques BarzunThe reason teaching has to go on is that children are not born human; they are made so.
Jacques BarzunI have always been - I think any student of history almost inevitably is - a cheerful pessimist.
Jacques BarzunThe mind tends to run along the groove of one's intention and overlook the actual expression.
Jacques Barzun