I do not usually revise much, though I often cut, particularly the end or toward the end of a poem
I wish i could press snowflakes in a book like flowers.
What are the questions you wish to ask?
One tends to write beyond what's needed
However, if a poem can be reduced to a prose sentence, there can't be much to it.
The aim of the poet, or other artist, is first to make something; and it's impossible to make something out of words and not communicate