A nothing day full of wild beauty .... Little fish stream by, a river in water.
What are the questions you wish to ask?
However, if a poem can be reduced to a prose sentence, there can't be much to it.
It is always pleasant to learn that someone takes an interest in a work which one enjoyed writing
I do not usually revise much, though I often cut, particularly the end or toward the end of a poem
One tends to write beyond what's needed