Get the big point of your advertisement into your headline. Use your headline as a hook to reach out and catch the special group of people you are trying to interest.
John CaplesA long headline that really says something is more effective than a brief heading that says nothing.
John CaplesTo impress your offer on the mind of the reader or listener, it is necessary to put it into brief, simple language...No farfetched or obscure statement will stop them. You have got to hit them where they live in the heart or in the head. You have got to catch their eyes or ears with something simple, something direct, something they want.
John CaplesThe success of an entire advertising campaign may stand or fall on what is said in the headlines of the individual advertisements.
John Caples