With each draft, the work gets better, and usually that means tighter. It means getting the precise word, not the approximate word.
John DufresneRevision is not the end of the creative process, but a new beginning. It's a chance not just to clean up and edit, but to open up and discover. The energetic prose comes about from all the energy that went into crafting it, I suppose.
John DufresneDrug programs began to turn their attention and money away from prevention and into maintenance. Methadone was cheaper than social workers, I suppose.
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