Don't be married to a line or verse if it can't rhyme, fit the meter, or doesn't fit the outline.
People dressed in a certain kind of clothing are never wrong. Also they never fart.
I felt white, drained of blood, cared for, purified. Peaceful.
The bell that measures time is ringing
Like the trains, she's never on time and always departing.
But maybe, underneath, she loves him too much. Maybe it's her excessive love that pushes him away.