Don't be afraid to write crap - it makes the best fertilizer. The more you write the better your chances of growing something wonderful.
Pat PattisonYOU CAN'T TELL UNLESS YOU SHOW FIRST. ... Showing makes the telling more powerful because your senses and your mind are both engaged.
Pat PattisonWhat is the character trying to say? Why? Be as specific as you can, using sense images that evoke something about the character. Try using the character's senses, even if the character is you.
Pat Pattison