Don't tell readers what to think. Let the action speak for itself.
I hope we'll get lucky enough to grow old together.
If I can write one sentence, simple and true every day, I'll be satisfied.
Not everyone out in a storm wants to be saved
I didn't want to be a sweet boy's sweet girlfriend. I wanted to be Fawn's equal, the kind of girl who stood up for herself and took care of business, who cut guys loose when it was required.
It was our favorite part of the day, this in-between time, and it always seemed to last longer than it should--a magic and lavender space unpinned from the hours around it, between worlds.