We don't want emotion handed to us - that's not emotion. You have to build and come from the reader's soul.
Peter OrnerI write by hand in my notebooks and number the drafts, so I know how crazy I can get with this. Some writers, like my teacher Marilynne Robinson, she only writes one draft. I've thought about this a lot; I think it's because she writes it 80 times in her head before it comes out.
Peter OrnerI sometimes wonder if our memories are a myth. We think we remember, but we are remembering the story and not the actual event?
Peter Orner