You're a beautiful drunk, daughter. But you're a drunk.
My heart is broken,” she goes. “It’s turned to a piece of stone. I’m no good. That’s what’s as bad as anything, that I’m no good anymore.
The fiction Im most interested in has lines of reference to the real world.
Remember Haydn's 104 symphonies. Not all of them were great. But there were 104 of them.
Don’t complain, don’t explain.
Fiction shows the external effects of internal conditions. Be aware of the tension between internal and external movement.