Fiction shows the external effects of internal conditions. Be aware of the tension between internal and external movement.
Raymond CarverI dressed and went for a walk - determined not to return until I took in what Nature had to offer.
Raymond CarverThere was a time when I thought I loved my first wife more than life itself. But now I hate her guts. I do. How do you explain that? What happened to that love? What happened to it, is what I'd like to know. I wish someone could tell me.
Raymond CarverIt ought to make us feel ashamed when we talk like we know what we're talking about when we talk about love.
Raymond CarverShe serves me a piece of it a few minutes out of the oven. A little steam rises from the slits on top. Sugar and spice - cinnamon - burned into the crust. But she's wearing these dark glasses in the kitchen at ten o'clock in the morning - everything nice - as she watches me break off a piece, bring it to my mouth, and blow on it. My daughter's kitchen, in winter. I fork the pie in and tell myself to stay out of it. She says she loves him. No way could it be worse.
Raymond Carver