Kids, if anything, are harder to write for because they are a more discerning audience. They will not stay with you if you go off on a tangent or if you give them extraneous information that doesn't serve the story. You really have to tell a tight story. You have to give them humor and suspense and believable characters. All those things that adults want too, but you have to be really on your game when you're writing for kids.
Rick RiordanIโve met plenty of embarrassing parents, but Kronos, the evil Titan Lord who wanted to destroy Western Civilization? Not the kind of dad you invited to school for Career Day.
Rick RiordanWe'de have to get in and get out the hard way; and if we made a mistake, there was no telling what sort of curse we'de unleash: monster guardians, plagues, fires, exploding donkeys(don't laugh; they're bad news).
Rick Riordan[Piper] rushed to get dressed. By the time she got up on deck, the others had already gatheredโall hastily dressed except for Coach Hedge, who had pulled the night watch. Frankโs Vancouver Winter Olympics shirt was inside out. Percy wore pajama pants and a bronze breastplate, which was an interesting fashion statement. Hazelโs hair was all blown to one side as though sheโd walked through a cyclone; and Leo had accidentally set himself on fire. His T-shirt was in charred tatters. His arms were smoking.
Rick RiordanThe Minotaur unstrapped his axe and swung it around. It was beautiful in a harsh Iโm~going~togut~you~like~a~fish kind of way. Each of its twin blades was shaped like an omega: ฮฉโthe last letter of the Greek alphabet. Maybe that was because the axe would be the last thing his victims ever saw
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