I think kids want the same thing from a book that adults want - a fast-paced story, characters worth caring about, humor, surprises, and mystery. A good book always keeps you asking questions, and makes you keep turning pages so you can find out the answers.
Rick RiordanEgypt is the First Nome. New York is the twenty-first. Whatโs the last one, the Three-hundred-and-sixtieth?โ โThat would be Antarctica,โ Zia said. โA punishment assignment. Nothing there but a couple of cold magicians and some magic penguins.โ โMagic penguins?โ โDonโt ask.
Rick RiordanThat's why we live by a river. Occasionally, I forget and pat Lit on the back--' 'I hate that.' King Midas & Lit
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