Pace is crucial. Fine writing isn't enough. Writing students can be great at producing a single page of well-crafted prose; what they sometimes lack is the ability to take the reader on a journey, with all the changes of terrain, speed and mood that a long journey involves. Again, I find that looking at films can help. Most novels will want to move close, linger, move back, move on, in pretty cinematic ways.
Rose TremainThere is something about the unexpected that moves us. As if the whole of existence is paid for in some way, except for that one moment, which is free.
Rose TremainI can inhabit any character in a way that is difficult to do successfully in a contemporary novel.
Rose TremainLearn from cinema. Be economic with descriptions. Sort out the telling detail from the lifeless one. Write dialogue that people would actually speak.
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