Sorry-in-the-Vale, Sorriest River, Crying Pools," said Jared. "Is the quarry called Really Depressed Quarry?

Real life is sometimes boring, rarely conclusive and boy, does the dialogue need work.

She had worried that she would break if her heart broke, but she wasn't broken. she had lost everything, but she was not lost. It seemed a worthwhile thing to know.

If you weren’t there, how do you know someone pushed her?” Sergeant Kenn asked. “Well …,” said Jared. “And what were you doing, running through a strange town at night?” “I was jogging?” Jared offered. “Without your shirt or your shoes?” “Uh,” said Jared.

I was thinking." "I see no evidence of that, Jared." Kami said.

Not doing things you can do is the whole point of laziness. Not doing something you can't do is just sensible.

Nick is driving us," Jamie informed him. "Nick has a car. Nick has TWO cars. Ha!