It was heavy, and I staggered when I lifted it; but it was strangely satifying to have a real burden upon my shoulders โ a kind of counterweight to my terrible heaviness of heart.
Sarah WatersCut like crazy. Less is more. I've often read manuscripts - including my own - where I've got to the beginning of, say, chapter two and have thought: โThis is where the novel should actually start.โ A huge amount of information about character and backstory can be conveyed through small detail. The emotional attachment you feel to a scene or a chapter will fade as you move on to other stories. Be business-like about it.
Sarah WatersI used to hate flying. I would sit there, rigid, convinced that if I relaxed, the plane would drop out of the sky.
Sarah Waters