She's very pretty but she's honey from the icebox, if you know what I mean. Cold sweets won't spread.
The writer cannot make the seas of distraction stand still, but he [or she] can at times come between the madly distracted and the distractions.
The dream of man's heart ... is that life may complete in significant pattern.
...is the carbon molecule lined with thought?
She was what we used to call a suicide blonde - dyed by her own hand.
The main reason for rewriting is not to achieve a smooth surface, but to discover the inner truth of your characters.