You look beautiful - David

you dont see me, now you do, but only if i want you to

So, there was this beautiful princess. She was locked in a high tower(...)She was stuck up there(...)So the only thing was to jump.

Perhaps it's worth saying again: One reader's discomfort should never stand in the way of another reader's survival.

Ah. So he's forgotten the most important rule of warfare. Which is... That nothing ever goes to plan.

But it's always taking a risk, when you ... kiss someone new.

I used to be a pre-industrial writer: thousands of words in a spurt and then a few days off. But as I get older, I've switched to a mode best described as 'slow and steady wins the race.' Basically, I write during the same four hours every day, after breakfast and the all-important coffee, generally in the same room and wearing the same pajamas.