Didn't this beat everything? A pretty and an ugly taking a stroll together. The warden came closer, confusion all over his middle-pretty face. Tally smiled. At least she was causing trouble to the end. "I'm Tally Youngblood," she said. "Make me pretty.
Scott WesterfeldThe world rests upon a turtle, which itself stands on the back of an elephant!โ Alek tried not to laugh. โThen what does the elephant stand on, madam?โ โDonโt try to be clever, young man.โ She narrowed her eyes. โItโs elephants all the way down!
Scott WesterfeldI like my first lines short and declarative. No complicated sentences. Of course, that's not really a Scott thing. It's pretty classic grab-the-reader technique.
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