You can't write something to please someone.
When I was a kid, I was afraid of large group of conforming people.
I love the first hour of a horror movie, the fear and anticipation. Then, when it gets bloody, I lose interest.
I won't rewrite on set, but I'll just trim the fat.
I wasn't good enough to be a professional soccer player obviously but that was my first goal in life.
I went to my first college to play soccer.