Just because you’re on their side doesn’t mean they’re on your side.

Just because you’re on their side doesn’t mean they’re on your side.

If this power could be used for good, it wouldn't be this power.

I believe God put that itchy spot on our backs just exactly where we can't reach it in order to encourage us be nice to each other.

Don't use metaphors in fantasy; your readers will take them literally. Or they may take them figuratively - but if so, they'll also take your magics and transformations figuratively. Either way, you're in trouble.

If there is no willingness to use force to defend civil society, it's civil society that goes away, not force.

There's a rule for what makes good fantasy work, and it's as strange as any riddle ever posed in a fairy tale: In fantasy, you can do anything; and therefore, the one thing you must not do is 'just anything.' Why? Because in a story where anything can happen and anything can be true, nothing matters. You have no reason to care what happens. It's all arbitrary, and arbitrary isn't interesting.