You can solve most of your writing problems if you stop after every sentence and ask: what does the reader need to know next?
William ZinsserBe yourself and your readers will follow you anywhere. Try to commit an act of writing and they will jump overboard to get away.
William ZinsserOne of the saddest sentences I know is "I wish I had asked my mother about that." Or my father. Or my grandmother. Or my grandfather. As every parent knows, our children are not as fascinated by our fascinating lives as we are.
William Zinsser