You have to live life if you're going to create believable lives on paper.
I feel the stars. Each sparkle sets aflame the pain in my heart.
Unfortunately, we're using the same language to talk about the language we'retalking about.
Writing isn't just on the page; it's voices in the reader's head. Read what you write out loud to someone-anyone-and you will catch all kinds of things.
Summer comes over the hill like a hairy blanket.
I believe we have breaks because we need them. So my suggestion is that you take the break. Eat chocolate.