To be successful in writing, use short sentences.
Write the story, take out all the good lines, and see if it still works.
All modern American literature comes from one book by Mark Twain called Huckleberry Finn.
I am glad we do not have to try to kill the stars.
One cat just leads to another." [Letter from Finca Vigia, Cuba, to his first wife, Elizabeth Hadley Richardson (1943).]
Since I had started to break down all my writing and get rid of all facility and try to make instead of describe, writing had been wonderful to do.