Use short sentences. Use short first paragraphs. Use vigorous English. Be positive, not negative.
You won't do our things with another girl, or say the same things, will you?
Show the readers everything, tell them nothing.
No; that doesn't interest me.' 'That's because you never read a book about it.
Somebody just back of you while you are fishing is as bad as someone looking over your shoulder while you write a letter to your girl.
Mr. Barnes, it is because I have lived very much that now I can enjoy everything so well