Pick a better verb. Most people use twenty verbs to describe everything from a run in their stocking to the explosion of an A-bomb.
Janet FitchShe should think about her own soul, what she was going to do with this funky tattered pond dank item. Dark and stained, a ruined thing.
Janet FitchI felt like an undeveloped photograph that he was printing, my image rising to the surface under his gaze.
Janet Fitch