This involves more than I can discuss here, but do it. Read the writers of great prose dialogue-people like Robert Stone and Joan Didion. Compression, saying as little as possible, making everything carry much more than is actually said. Conflict. Dialogue as part of an ongoing world, not just voices in a dark room. Never say the obvious. Skip the meet and greet.
Janet FitchI tried writing fiction as a little kid, but had a teacher humiliate me, so didn't write again until I was a senior in college.
Janet FitchDon't attach yourself to anyone who shows you the least bit of attention because you're lonely. Lonliness is the human condition. No one is ever going to fill that space. The best thing you can do it know yourself... know what you want.
Janet Fitchshe was such a bad actress. she never said her lines rite, it was something perverse in her nature. and wat was her line anyway?
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