Always tell us where we are. And don't just tell us where something is, make it pay off. Use description of landscape to help you establish the emotional tone of the scene. Keep notes of how other authors establish mood and foreshadow events by describing the world around the character. Look at the openings of Fitzgerald stories, and Graham Greene, they're great at this.
Janet FitchIf evil means to be self-motivated, to be the center of oneโs own universe, to live on oneโs own terms, then every artist, every thinker, every original mind, is evil.
Janet FitchMy house is modern, but I like my writing room to be old fashioned. I write on a little wooden secretary desk.
Janet FitchShe was a beautiful woman dragging a crippled foot and I was that foot. I was bricks sewn into the hem of her clothes, I was a steel dress
Janet Fitch