What is a scene? a) A scene starts and ends in one place at one time (the Aristotelian unities of time and place-this stuff goes waaaayyyy back). b) A scene starts in one place emotionally and ends in another place emotionally. Starts angry, ends embarrassed. Starts lovestruck, ends disgusted. c) Something happens in a scene, whereby the character cannot go back to the way things were before. Make sure to finish a scene before you go on to the next. Make something happen.
Janet FitchI'm always looking for something new and interesting to say. And it can't be something I'm directly experiencing.
Janet FitchPanic was the worst thing. When you panicked, you couldn't see possibilities. Then came despair.
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