I would so hate to be a first-person character! Always on your guard, always having people read your thoughts!
the Real-World was a sprawling mess of a book in need of a good editor.
...being written by someone who might not quite understand the subconscious nuance of the character leaves us in varying degrees of flatness.
If the real world were a book, it would never find a publisher.
To each our own Hamlet.
A surfeit of information often hides an untruth,” he said, with annoying clarity.