If you are going to emphasize certain words in the headline, be sure that they are the words that say something.
John CaplesAvoid the "hard-to-grasp" headline - the headline that requires thought and is not clear at first glance.
John CaplesWhat good is all the painstaking work on copy if the headline isn't right? If the headline doesn't stop people, the copy might as well be written in Greek.
John CaplesTo impress your offer on the mind of the reader or listener, it is necessary to put it into brief, simple language...No farfetched or obscure statement will stop them. You have got to hit them where they live in the heart or in the head. You have got to catch their eyes or ears with something simple, something direct, something they want.
John Caples