The most frequent reason for unsuccessful advertising is advertisers who are so full of their own accomplishments (the world's best seed!) that they forget to tell us why we should buy (the world's best lawn!).
John CaplesGet the big point of your advertisement into your headline. Use your headline as a hook to reach out and catch the special group of people you are trying to interest.
John CaplesIf you use a poor headline, it does not matter how hard you labor over your copy because your copy will not be read.
John Caples