There's something about a parenthesis in fiction that puts one off, saying, "It's me, moi, jumping in now."
John L'HeureuxObscenities are too often used for shock value, as a kind of shorthand for real expression of emotion. You've got to scale down your monstrosities. A scream is not a discovery.
John L'HeureuxA short story is a writer's way of thinking through experience... Journalism aims at accuracy, but fiction's aim is truth. The writer distorts reality in the interest of a larger truth.
John L'Heureux