When you catch an adjective, kill it - perhaps the best possible advice for budding writers.
Mark TwainSome civilized women would lose half their charm without dress and some would lose all of it.
Mark TwainWhat a lumbering poor vehicle prose is for the conveying of a great thought! ... Prose wanders around with a lantern & laboriously schedules & verifies the details & particulars of a valley & its frame of crags & peaks, then Poetry comes, & lays bare the whole landscape with a single splendid flash.
Mark Twain