In commercial fiction especially, everything in the story usually contributes directly to the plot The shorter the story, the truer this is
Nancy KressReligious reverence for one's own job, even if the job is worth doing, is a sexual turnoff.
Nancy KressEvery paragraph should accomplish two goals: advance the story, and develop your characters as complex human beings.
Nancy KressWhat characters do must grow out of who they are, and who they are is, in turn, influenced by what you make happen to them.
Nancy Kress