Delete nothing. Move nothing. Change nothing. Learn everything.
New Orleans cuisine is Creole rather than Cajun.
With the first kiss his mouth will taste of wormwood.
Ive tried to avoid labels, but they always find you.
This is the point being missed by readers who lament Liquor's lack of hot sex scenes, probably because they aren't old enough to understand that a passionate relationship could be about anything other than sex.
Never relinquish your terrors. That's when they catch you.