Where there is no faith, devils are a necessity.
Consider the "new" woman. She's trying to be Pollyanna Borgia, clearly a conflict of interest. She's supposed to be a ruthless winner at work and a bundle of nurturing sweetness at home.
Never, ever underestimate your readers. Everything you do registers.
Nothing is unnatural - just untried.
Possession of a secret is no guarantee of its truth.
We all want to leave our children the Garden of Eden and we wind up giving them hardscrabble.