The main reason for rewriting is not to achieve a smooth surface, but to discover the inner truth of your characters.
Death deserves dignity.
I would like to explain that I consider prayer above all an act of gratitude for existence.
What Homo sapien imagines, he may slowly convert himself to.
I don't know exactly how it's done. I let it alone a good deal.
It would not be practical for her to hate herself. Luckily, God sends a substitute, a husband.