I like my first lines short and declarative. No complicated sentences. Of course, that's not really a Scott thing. It's pretty classic grab-the-reader technique.
Scott WesterfeldAround the outskirts of the city, cut off from town by the black oval of the river, everything was in darkness. Everyone ugly was in bed by now.
Scott WesterfeldSo what are those balloons for? In case you fall off your hoverboard?' -- Tally to Peris
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