I see manuscripts and books that are spoiled for the literary reader because they are one long stream of top-of-the-head writing, a writer telling a story without concern for precision or freshness in the use of language. Some of this storytelling reads as if it were spoken rather than written, stuffed with tired images that pop into the writer's head because they are so familiar. The top of the head is fit for growing hair, but not for generating fine prose.
Sol SteinDialogue, contrary to popular view, is not a recording of actual speech; it is a semblance of speech, an invented language of exchanges that build in tempo or content toward climaxes.
Sol SteinIn our not-yet-acknowledged secret garden lie the seeds of some of our best not-yet-written stories
Sol SteinMost of the time, tough, combative, adversarial dialogue is much more exciting than physical action.
Sol SteinTo create tension, dialogue needs to be stretched out. That is, characters should not be immediately responsive.
Sol SteinReaders, transformed by film and TV, are used to seeing stories. The reading experience . . . is increasingly visual.
Sol SteinReaders take in dialogue one thought at a time. A frequent mistake of beginners is to combine thoughts, which may be suitable for other forms of writing but not for dialogue. Another mistake is speechifying. Three sentences at a time is tops, yet many beginners write speeches that go on and on.
Sol SteinOur instinct as human beings is to provide answers, to ease tension. As writers our job is the opposite, to create tension and not dispel it immediately.
Sol Stein