Readers take in dialogue one thought at a time. A frequent mistake of beginners is to combine thoughts, which may be suitable for other forms of writing but not for dialogue. Another mistake is speechifying. Three sentences at a time is tops, yet many beginners write speeches that go on and on.
Sol SteinIn our not-yet-acknowledged secret garden lie the seeds of some of our best not-yet-written stories
Sol SteinReaders, transformed by film and TV, are used to seeing stories. The reading experience . . . is increasingly visual.
Sol Stein