Don't worry about how pretty (the story) sounds, how lilting it is, and the imagery, and the metaphor, all that. Most readers don't care. It's the people in your book that matter.
I also discovered that you can get used to a man , much like you do a household pet!
At least be a nice lesbian or you're going to give the rest a bad rap.
I want to push the fast-forward button until I get back to happy.
I let my characters do the talking, simple as that.
I'm more interested in interpersonal relationships - between lovers families, siblings. That's why I write about how we treat each other.