Give your main clause a little space. Prose is not like boxing; the skilled writer deliberately telegraphs his punch, knowing that the reader wants to take the message directly on the chin.
William SafireCast aside any column about two subjects. It means the pundit chickened out on the hard decision about what to write about that day.
William SafireThis is what it's all about. From what I could see, you could get a bunch of people together, whip up the press and have some impact.
William SafireWe are all environmentalists now, but we are not all planetists. An environmentalist realizes that nature has its pleasures and deserves respect. A planetist puts the earth ahead of the earthlings.
William Safire